So often, we get a set of drafts from some Brave Supplicant or other, and we retchgroan take pause. And we take a deep breath and we dig in and we rip ’em to shreds. Like, the essays suck, and we have to find creative and not-totally-offensive ways to say so. (If you’re reading this now, and you just got back your ripped-to-shreds essays from EssaySnark — no, we’re not writing this post about you. Promise. This post was written months ago and we’re just now getting around to posting it.)
Where were we?
And we’re often surprised by this, because typically we’ve been working with this person to some degree or another and we had faith in them, else we wouldn’t have taken on the task of reading their work.
So then Brave Supplicant goes away for awhile, and eventually comes back, and typically has some lament of a question about “I totally understand what you’re saying about these essays, EssaySnark, you’re right, they totally suck, blah blah blah” and they proceed to write something AMAZING in their email to us.
They say: I wanted to write about such-and-such but I didn’t because…
Or they say: I wrote my Harvard goals that way because Harvard wants ambitious goals, don’t they?
Or they say: I thought about writing about my little sister and the way she…. but then I decided it was too corny…
And we read through their email, and we think, “Why the heck didn’t they write their essays this way?????”
People have this great habit of writing great emails to EssaySnark. Emails where they pour out their heart about something. Emails where they are AUTHENTIC and REAL.
Emails that should become essays.
And so we write back to them: Brave Supplicant! Yes, you’ve got it! Use that!
And so this post is telling all of you: USE THAT!
This is especially important for Stanford. They blast this advice all over their darn website but do you listen?
No. Not, at least, until after you’ve made EssaySnark want to slit our wrists with bad drafts first.
Here’s a novel idea: A leader is someone who acts with imperfect information. A leader is someone who makes strategic decisions in times of ambiguity. A leader is someone who has his own style. A leader is someone who does her research and puts in the effort… and then commits. Leaders trust their instincts.
Use your gut. Work that intuition. Believe in yourself. If you don’t believe in yourself, how in the heck are ya gonna get anybody else to do so?
Maybe some people have to go through the grueling process of a dead-end draft and a failed false start of an essay before coming to this. Maybe some people have to have EssaySnark gently tear their writing to pieces and tell them it needs a do-over before they can do this. Maybe it only comes from a place of desperation, where you give up, you surrender, you throw up your hands and STOP TRYING SO DARN HARD, that the honesty is given a chance to see the light of day.
We sure wish it didn’t work this way. We sure suffer through your pain, nearly as much as you do. We sure would like it if people got to this place sooner.
But you know what? This is a process. Particularly when you’re struggling with those crazy Stanford essays, where you’re faced with gosh-darn-it difficult questions, where you really truly do need to dig deep and uncover stuff.
Applying to bschool is a remarkably challenging, revealing, and often downright painful proposition. We try and make it easy on you Brave Supplicants. But there comes a point when all we can say is, “Nope, that’s not it, this is off, that’s missing the target…” — over and over and over again — and maybe that will prompt you to lift your little head up and bleat “Help me!” in a way that your best self can hear, and rise up, and take over, and rescue you from yourself.
Damn. Sounds like a religious experience or something.
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Trust your heart. Believe in yourself. Follow your dream and you can do whatever you want to. Ubiquitous morals in Hollywood movies and many TV series. But potentially poisonous. As Andrew Rilstone has pointed out, “this is a deeply re-assuring message for the high-achievers who make movies. It says in affect ‘We are rich and famous because we deserve it’. It is a very depressing message for the people who make their coffee.”
Plus it’s, you know … Not true.
(This image is from a T-shirt that I am very tempted to buy.)
As Terry Pratchett pointed out in The Wee Free Men [amazon.com, amazon.co.uk]:
If you trust yourself and believe in your dreams and follow your star … you’ll still get beaten by people who spent their time working hard and learning things and weren’t so lazy.
And yet, and yet …
Lack of belief can stop you from doing things that you would otherwise be able to do. What it can’t do is enable you to do things that you’re just not capable of. I would love to play football for England, but not only am I 43 years old, unfit and somewhat overweight; I was a terrible footballer even back when I used to play. Self-belief can’t change that. But I am a pretty decent singer and an OK guitarist, and there was never really any reason why I shouldn’t have stood up at a folk club at some point in the last decade and sung a few songs. Looking back, the reason I didn’t do that comes down pretty much to … you know, not believing in myself and trusting my heart and following my dream (hereafter BIM&TMH&FMD). And sure enough, once I started doing it I found that it was OK. I’m not going to win any awards, but, hey, no-one gets up and walks out in disgust. So that’s something.
And once I’d spotted that, it turned out to be a pattern that applied to other parts of my life. It didn’t occur to me for a couple of years that my avocational interest in dinosaurs could result in writing papers that contributed to the technical literature, and in fact it took several pretty solid kicks up the backside from my friend Matt Wedel before I started to even take the idea seriously. But, yeah, turns out that that’s something I can do. And I suppose it shouldn’t really have come as a surprise since the core skills — careful reading, absorbing information, thinking hard, being methodical, writing well — are the very same things that I do five days a week in my programming job.
Come to that, it applies in programming as well. It’s an area where I’ve been confident (some would say over-confident) from the start. That’s hurt me in some ways — I didn’t take Computer Science in school because I stupidly thought that it had nothing to teach me, and boy was I wrong! But it’s helped me in other ways. That same over-confidence allowed me to write commercially published games for the VIC-20 when I was fourteen, and to make what was, as far as I can tell, the world’s first Internet MUD a few years later. Understand: the games were nothing special, and the MUD was actually pretty awful. But the fact that they existed at all was in part because, without being conscious of it, I was signed up for the whole BIM&TMH&FMD thing — at least so far as it applied to programming.
Here’s the key point: these are areas where I was right to Believe In Myself etc. And I had good, rational reasons for doing so. I’m not talking about someone who can’t sing going on Bognor’s Got Talent and thinking he can win on sheer force of belief. I’m talking about taking a look at what you’re good at, assessing it soberly and objectively, and saying “Hey! Why the heck am I not doing X?” And then going ahead and doing it, not allowing an unfounded lack of self-belief to hinder you.
The challenge for me now is to figure out what else this applies to. For example, I’ve had an idea for a novel floating around in the back of my mind for a couple of years, but sort of assumed that that’s not something I can do. But … well, wait a minute — why not? I know I can put sentences together, I know I can plan out a narrative sequence (I have to do this for my palaeontology papers). Looked at objectively, this doesn’t look like something that I’m fundamentally unable to do. I should have a crack at it, see what happens. Really, there’s no reason not to. [Update, March 2014: still no novel, but I did write a non-fiction book about Doctor Who.]
[Apart from lack of time, of course. That is often the limiting factor. To do something new, I will probably have to give up one of the old things. Of course I could give up re-watching every Buffy episode. But, hey, a man has to relax.]
I want to leave you with this observation. Since we are now living in the Shiny Digital Future, this is much easier than it used to be. OK, it doesn’t help with becoming a rock star or an astronaut, but the Internet does mean that anyone who cares to take a stab at writing can find an audience. It means that anyone who writes an interesting program can distribute it world-wide to interested people. It means that you can find and make connections with people who are doing the kind of thing you want to do. You have better access to research materials than anyone, even the most established academics, had ten or twenty years ago.
So is there a project that you want to do, that you have the basic skills for, that you have access to the resources for, but you’re not doing? Why not? Is it because you don’t BIY&TYH&FYD? If it is, then get your self-belief in line with reality. Judge yourself as generously (and as harshly) as you would a third party. Do you have the stuff for your project, be it folk singing or programming or writing a novel?
Then do the project.
Because it’s not true that “you can do anything if you believe in yourself”. But there are things you can do that you never will if you don’t believe in yourself. Don’t let that happen.
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